Some terrible quick sketches for the last chapter - I changed around the beginning and the end quite a bit, mostly in the dialogue. I usually find that scribbling stuff out (even if it’s super ugly) really helps with working that stuff out! I have a tonne of unused conversations and scenes from older chapters, just because I change things a lot, since I write as I go.
My biggest concern was that Kolya would be super reluctant to go along with this weird magic plan, but he obviously had to eventually. I changed the end around a lot too; it originally had an extra two pages, but they didn’t really add anything to the conversation, and I don’t think they would’ve kept talking anyway.
So yeah! Just coz I said I’d post this rough stuff when I got the chance to scan it.